They built a Fence
So they could keep us out,
But time brings wear and tear,
The fence developed cracks,
Through the cracks our eyes met,
They saw us,
We saw them,
Then they couldn’t un-see what they had done.
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They built a Fence
So they could keep us out,
But time brings wear and tear,
The fence developed cracks,
Through the cracks our eyes met,
They saw us,
We saw them,
Then they couldn’t un-see what they had done.
Impressively powerful and poignant for such a short piece, and feeks like the beginning of a story I’d like to read more of… great stuff! And i just love your tag line 🙂 Harula xx
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I like them short and to the point. But you make a good case of making it longer hmmmm
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LOL – I did enjoy it, so of course I’d like more, but there’s also a case for leaving people wanting…:) x
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I meant ‘feels’!
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Powerful piece Joy. I love it 🙂
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Thank you! Glad you Enjoyed.
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Nice piece. Reminded me of the book, The Boy in the Stripped Pajamas
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It is one of my favorite books. Thank you.
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